When I was a freshman, I was very lazy. Now I am not that lazy with my work. This shows that I try to turn in more of my work instead of blowing it off. This also shows that over the years you start to mature on your own. I have also became more taller over the years. This shows that my height has changed. Also this shows that I have really have grown up. By my senior year, I hope to be done with all my school work and graduate.
You kinda messed up in the second to last sentence.
ReplyDeleteIt's great that you have hope to graduate and just keep having that hope because you know you can do it.
ReplyDeleteIt's good that you're determined to graduate but you should work a little more when you write sentences and remember to re-check your work.
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